tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post752077397689637990..comments2008-05-10T16:36:19.259-04:00Andréehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08159511912645034019meeyauw@gmail.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-50019101345249070952008-05-10T16:36:00.000-04:002008-05-10T16:36:00.000-04:00Your poem puts me there. I feel the sudden silence.<BR/><BR/>The photo is beautiful.<BR/>I really enjoy reading everyones poems, especially when accompanied with photography.MyBellaviahttp://mybellavia.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-49911993184266241992008-05-08T06:20:00.000-04:002008-05-08T06:20:00.000-04:00I have the impression that the blackbirds song makes the place seem even more deserted.spacedlawhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-44807161186064641272008-05-07T05:29:00.000-04:002008-05-07T05:29:00.000-04:00Just all round lovely!<BR/><BR/>Smiled when I saw you have a new camera. I have my first digital camera and even wrote a poem to clebrate my first pic! It's a great feeling being able to create pic and poem!<BR/><BR/>GemmaGreyscale Territoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-2377361920098224292008-05-06T11:56:00.000-04:002008-05-06T11:56:00.000-04:00yes!! a fantastic twist on 'deserted' in the cycle of life. love the use of the word 'screak'!qualcosa di bellohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15107076097533430296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-52080460661150495372008-05-05T15:41:00.000-04:002008-05-05T15:41:00.000-04:00That is a great way to describe the life in a swamp. Love it and the new word you gave me, screak.Teri Chttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16029722057577018059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-3315420105260645632008-05-05T14:49:00.000-04:002008-05-05T14:49:00.000-04:00Nice place, and a nice poem. We are starting to see coyotes here, too.gardenpathhttp://gardenpath.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-48853783982106625302008-05-05T08:36:00.000-04:002008-05-05T08:36:00.000-04:00I like the word "screak" - sounds like a combination of "screech", "scream" "shriek" and "squawk".<BR/><BR/>The book by Gerald is an excellent resource and well recommended.Mandyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09390965174767597956noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-8863131675585790882008-05-04T18:39:00.000-04:002008-05-04T18:39:00.000-04:00..hi Andree[New Cam-congrats!]-from a non-poetic angle,ur lines display _Perfect Shot Division( a film maker's view point)<BR/>Coyote appears-{shot 1}<BR/>peeper song deserts the bog-{shot 2}<BR/>blackbirds screak alarm-{shot3}..but surely the haiku is nice/ur picture great!..many thanks!!zoya gautamhttp://horizonnext.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-88527580751000726672008-05-04T17:11:00.000-04:002008-05-04T17:11:00.000-04:00Oh. Wow. Silence follows this strong poem and stills me to the bone. Wonderful, Andree. God bless.<BR/><A HREF="http://slcpoems.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">Writing in Faith: Poems</A>SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-6256089631348915312008-05-04T13:34:00.000-04:002008-05-04T13:34:00.000-04:00Andree, congratulations on the new camera. Lovely haiku today. I will hold you in my prayers and wish you comfort in your pain.Ravenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-45539204267554712582008-05-04T10:57:00.000-04:002008-05-04T10:57:00.000-04:00Andree, lovely haiku this week! I had to look up screak... good use of the word! Excellent job! Thanks for sharing!the teachhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17516961981692076719noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-72161033004770724972008-05-04T09:18:00.000-04:002008-05-04T09:18:00.000-04:00All songs deserts the Swamp when to Red-Tailed Hawk hunts.<BR/><BR/>I hope you are feeling less sad as the week progesses.WillThink4Winehttp://willthink4wine.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-80278763819951184652008-05-04T08:19:00.000-04:002008-05-04T08:19:00.000-04:00Wow! This haiku really packs in the emotion. We should all watch out for predators.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8039480482795893526.post-1677782676044916772008-05-04T03:39:00.000-04:002008-05-04T03:39:00.000-04:00I have Red-winged blackbirds nesting in the cat-tails at my pond. the male is very busy chasing everyone and thing away. I hope all is going better for you. MBSmall City Sceneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12307313549480618415noreply@blogger.com